Ariz's Ashes

This is my part of a screen play my sister's and I started.... Ladies let's resume please...
Premise: A story of three young ladies who are determined to use the worst that life has handed them for the best.
"Butterscotch has never tasted so Sweet"
{Napkin turns into Napkin being folded around the butterscotch}The funeral prior, signifies the break between the sisters union. The candy brings the story back in time when the unity was so strong that even one simple candy was eagerly shared. {Abuela begins to distribute the small pieces of candy amounst the sisters.}
{Napkin turns into Napkin being folded around the butterscotch}The funeral prior, signifies the break between the sisters union. The candy brings the story back in time when the unity was so strong that even one simple candy was eagerly shared. {Abuela begins to distribute the small pieces of candy amounst the sisters.}
Abuela
Ninas, lo estoy rompiendo en pedasos chiqitos pa que no se toran.
Ninas, lo estoy rompiendo en pedasos chiqitos pa que no se toran.
Kiara
?Necesitas Ayuda?
?Necesitas Ayuda?
Abuela
Gracias, de le esos pedasos a sus hermanas.
Gracias, de le esos pedasos a sus hermanas.
Victoria
Abuela, puedes dar me uno mas grande?
Abuela, puedes dar me uno mas grande?
Abuela
Claro, mija.
Claro, mija.
Renata
Como es que siempre tienes exactamento tres caramellos, Abuela?
Como es que siempre tienes exactamento tres caramellos, Abuela?
Narration: The girls often wondered if their Abuela had a secret Butterscotch factory that supplied her three candies for every visit.
Some time later in the screenplay....
We arrived at night, the sea and all its sounds and smells enthralled me. I stood memerized by just how good the wind felt against my skin. My sisters and I chased the waves for what seemed to be all night and when I needed to catch my breath I lay flat on my back gazing at the stars while running my fingers threw the thousands of tiny holes in the sand where occasionally a crab would pop out to protest........
Our departure was as abrupt as our arrival.......
We arrived at night, the sea and all its sounds and smells enthralled me. I stood memerized by just how good the wind felt against my skin. My sisters and I chased the waves for what seemed to be all night and when I needed to catch my breath I lay flat on my back gazing at the stars while running my fingers threw the thousands of tiny holes in the sand where occasionally a crab would pop out to protest........
Our departure was as abrupt as our arrival.......

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